Literacy Narrative Revisions

For my first draft of my literacy narraitve, I wrote how basketball changed my life and explained about things that happened through out all different levels of playing.  I wrote about what went on through out the different years of basketball and I wrote about the coaches and the impacts that they had on me. I wrote about the different things that happened during basketball.

For my second draft, I wrote more in depth about coaches and more about what happened with my life.  I wrote about an injury that I had my junior year, that impacted not only my basketball season, but my cross-country season too.  Now, I wrote more in depth on certain events that happened during the times.  

I haven't finished my final draft completely, but I am going to focus more on the changes that happened along with all of the events.